Feedback:
Keep developing designs (such as creating more colour palette)
Emphasise the images that are important (A3 paper)
Come up with different ideas on how the glass is held up
Don’t use images if you’re not going to talk about it during the presentation
Raster etching acrylic and see how this will look against the lights
Plan different layouts of the shelter
Iteration makes the idea work
More colour palette ideas
Final presentaion all A3 paper:
Colour palette
Multiples of final render work (includes perspectives, floor plan, section)
Thoroughly plan out my presentaion layout
Feedback from formative presentation:
There evidence of an interesting form emerging, it needs to go through more design iterations for development – its structure, layout and colour pallet. Consider which effect is best for your proposal- what type of atmosphere would you like to create and why?
Angel 