Read 10 manifesto and write a memory caulis about it
(gathering info)
Research
Analysis
Start a draft manifesto of your own using the other manifesto as an idea
10 Manifestos
- Clueless Manifesto
Tones
Concise, can look silly but serious
Repetition
Sounds certain but uncertain
Layout
A lot of spacing, empty texts in conrners, make readers to turn pages
Tiny texts – small thoughts
The paper is considered to be the brain of girls and the small texts is her thoughts
Considered how she’s inconfusion the text being small is understandable
2. Gilbert and George
Tones
Sounds serious and direct
Too simple to be a law
Putting something casial as the first, so that people aren’t bored in the beginning
Layout
Colours – red and yellow screaming for attention, warnings?
“listing” faxed, pixel are visible
3. What is to be done?
Tones
Repetition (back to number 1 and 2)
Layout
Lists/ listing
4. Lena Heins
Tones
Sounds serious
Kind of silly/ waste of time
Layout
Took a screenshot and zoommed in to print it out
Alot of words/ sentences are covered
Paragraphs are numbered
The use of paper feels as if there’s more than one paper to read, which explains the page number on the bottom
5. The _______ manifesto
Tones
It makes the reader oblige to use their brain more rather than just reading it, as there’s a lot of missing words
Layout
Fill in the blank
Quiz
Borders
6. Spatial practices
Tones
Sounds serious
It goes in depth about spatial practices and what they do
Layout
Listing
Comic style
All caps
Use of colours red and yellow for attention
7. Gay liberation
Tones
Fists – serious
all small caps – not as serious
Layout
Stained edges
Old paper
Could be a title page
Fists to symbolise/ support gay genders
Ripped paper
No words
8. Manifesto Julian Rosefeldt
Tones
104 pages – goes in depth and sounds serious
The use of bold letters makes people less bored of reading it, however seeing as there’s 104 pages doesn’t say so for people that doesn’t like reading
Layout
Wrote a whole book (104 pages long)
Some sentences are in bold letters compared to other rather than a book with all small words
Bold words – highlights/ key parts/ important info
Uses portaits of people
9. Why cheap art?
Tones
Alot of exclamation mark – seriousness/ wan’t to get their point across/ loud
Layout
Poetry like
Caps and lower case
10. Book to the future
Tones
Weird (font style)
Layout
Webpage like
Unique fonts
Link
Abstract paragraph
Starting my manifesto
Using the link below I will be drafting my manifestos
https://www.huffpost.com/entry/write-manifesto_b_5575496
2. Making notes
I believe …..
Respect is key
Personal spaces
Spaces
Comfort
Public
Privacy
Equality
I want to …..
Treat other people you want to be treated
Equality for people
Respect other people’s privacy
Carefree
Thoughtful
I know this to be true …..
You give respect = You get respect
Respect is a two way street
Respect is for those who deserve it, not for those who demand it
Personal space is like an invisible bubble that surrounds you and makes you feel safe
In reflection to my part 2, since I focused on privacy I am thinking of doing my manifesto on privacy or boundaries.
After reading/ looking through other manifestos I think I quite like simple (not much going on) to avoid boredom and more eye catching
Ideas:
“Maifesto for privacy”
“Manifesto for reaching out boundaries”
“Manifesto for respect”
“Manifesto for personal spaces”
Tones:
Serious
Simple fonts (engaging, eye catching,)
Gets my point across
Layout:
Spaced out
Spaces
Equality
Various sizes of letters
Word vomit
We live in a time of constant change, where people treat public social places like a private space.
We need to respect other people’s personal space like how we want other people to respect ours.
Caring, thoughtful, NO to selfishness,
1.
2.
Notes
Research about the place
Reflecting on the intervention (before you start your draft)
Tone reflects on fonts, colours, communication
We are writing a manifesto that establishes a social space
Manifesto supports the research
Create so many process work of your manifesto to come up with ONEfinal manifesto (more than 15+ process work)
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